First Draft.

The next few blog posts will be about our progress on making our trailer. 

So about 3 weeks ago we made our first draft trailer. When reviewing it we came to the conclusion that we didn't like it because it looked too much like a short film. 

We were happy with the storyline, the acting and the music but it was too linear so we are now in progress to making a second draft.

Here is the original:  

First Draft