Audience Feedback.

Audience Feedback

We showed our first draft to the other media groups.

This gave us an opportunity to see what our target audience did and did not like.

Our main criticisms were:

-Do not like the font

-Story line is confusing

We have taken both of these things into consideration and discussed how we can make them better so that the audience will not pick them our again the next time we show it.

Steps we will take to improve the font:

1. We will research other action thriller film trailers and look at the types of font they have used.
2. We will decide on a font that we like the look of and try and find similar ones.
3. Finally, we will make a survey and send it to our audience that we showed to to before, of our top 5 fonts and chose the one that gets to most votes. (It is important to use the same audiences as we cannot ask someone who has not seen our trailer as they will not know what it is meant to look and feel like).

Steps we will take to make the story line less confusing:

After discussion within our group, we decided that the main reason that the audience found our trailer confusing was because it was not completely finished yet. We believe that when we have finished the whole thing, it will all make sense. (We will make sure of this when we have finished).

Our main positives were:

-Good shots

-Good music that fits well 

We are happy with the positive feedback that we got as we believe that the shots are all good as we took time and effort to make them work.

We also are glad that the audience like the music as we believe that it is one of the main features of the trailer and it brings it all together. If we had to change the music this would change our whole trailer as the cuts etc are in time with the music.